minesweeper0

Fundamental Force is only ten votes behind Black Tarantula, I cannot accept my pride and joy being overtaken! I refuse! Black Tarantula rewrite is nearly finished (only ten chapters left and we should be good), and then I'm going to get new chapters out soon! 
          	
          	My arms are doing much better now, so the printing press is getting back into action soon...

minesweeper0

@alek_ackerman That sounds more like it.
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alek_ackerman

@minesweeper0 it'll probably be around 60 more chapters with the amount of worldbuilding and character introductions ahead 
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minesweeper0

@alek_ackerman That's some wishful thinking.
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minesweeper0

Fundamental Force is only ten votes behind Black Tarantula, I cannot accept my pride and joy being overtaken! I refuse! Black Tarantula rewrite is nearly finished (only ten chapters left and we should be good), and then I'm going to get new chapters out soon! 
          
          My arms are doing much better now, so the printing press is getting back into action soon...

minesweeper0

@alek_ackerman That sounds more like it.
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alek_ackerman

@minesweeper0 it'll probably be around 60 more chapters with the amount of worldbuilding and character introductions ahead 
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minesweeper0

@alek_ackerman That's some wishful thinking.
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JuantheChap

Hey I wanted to ask about how tall is the phantom stranger since in some chapters he’s depicted as being tall

minesweeper0

I won't lie, I've been asked this question like three times this week already and I absolutely despite it. He can be as tall or as short as you want, I write him to be tall cause that's just how I imagine him to be in my head, but it's completely up to you.
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minesweeper0

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Has anyone been watching MHA Vigilantes recently?
          
          I've watched the first two episodes with a friend, the op is hella catchy, and I fuck heavily with Knuckleduster. I love him. I've heard the manga is really good, but the show's slow to start so far imo. I can already tell that Pop Step's getting that unfortunate treatment that all women in shounen do, where she just doesn't do shit and has to get saved all the time. Honestly, it cannot be this difficult to write women in manga/anime without needing them to be completely useless.

minesweeper0

@GrimFred I haven't read the whole story, so I don't know if it would make sense for him to be involved in any of the plot. Vigilantes starts around four years before MHA does (I think), so [Y/N] would be thirteen and would be under All For One and Garaki's care, but I don't think they would've been sending him on missions at that age.  
            
            I wrote in the first few chapters that [Y/N] was largely kept hidden for a long time, so you can just assume he was in the background with Garaki training his Quirk.
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GrimFred

If Y/N had a part in this would he more or less just show up in the end?
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minesweeper0

@alek_ackerman Even Mikasa gets that same treatment to an extent, like she really didn't have much of a character in early AOT outside of saying 'Ereh' every few minutes, which sucks because she gets a lot more interesting later on, but I know people who didn't get so far into AOT (past like season one) who find her completely uninteresting, which I think is understandable considering. 
            
            But Annie is a pretty well written, Hange too.
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God181

@minesweeper0 hey I’m wondering when’s the next update/addition/chapter for your Pokemon and one piece stories I’m really enjoying them so far also hope your arms gets better!

minesweeper0

Appreciate the kind words. MHA and BT (maybe Bleach) are my priorities atm.
            
            I struggle with the Pokémon story cause I just don't feel it all that much, and I write very slowly and very badly when its for a story I'm not feeling. This might change in the future but I'm not very motivated to update it right now. 
            
            I don't have any real plans to update the One Piece story in the immediate future, just because I'm struggling with how much I want to integrate the Berserk Golden Age story into the insert's backstory, and how that works within the One Piece world (in terms of Holy Knights mostly, and we're only really learning more about the Holy Knights now in the manga). I also want to re-rewrite some of the earlier chapters because I feel like Kid and Killer could have had a better introduction, and could have expanded on Bonney's scenes more. But I have a plan for where I want the story to go, I just want to finish some of my other stuff.
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minesweeper0

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Calling minesweeper nation to arms!
          
          I want to know what you're all reading at the moment (besides the stuff that I put out). 
          
          I'm curious to see what fine dining wattpad has to offer these days after not reading anything for years straight. 
          
          I was going to look on my own but:
          1) I can't be bothered. 
          2) I got shit to do, and... 
          3) Wattpad suggestions might as well just not exist with the utter rubbish they put on my home page. 
          
          So consider it a communal effort. 
          
          I want newer stories! I've probably read everything pre-2020. I used to just read whatever was at the top of the malereader tag, lots and lots and lots of slop... 
          
          Warning! If your recommendation is straight ass I'm going to judge you profusely (especially if you're one of my regulars I reply to often). I want to read biblical scripture second only to the Bible. If it's anything less you will be punished with ONE THOUSAND YEARS OF BAD LUCK! CURSE OF RAH!
          
          (Actual news, my arms are doing better and I'm not in constant pain, only periodic pain!) 

NGC_6543

Forgot to add this one but “well fu-” by Thebubbleboy124 is also pretty good
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NGC_6543

Been a minute since I’ve read his stories but I remember Panilith being really good
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Bloodcridict

@minesweeper0 anything by thhulium he is peak
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minesweeper0

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Yo, I expanded out the fight scene between All Might and Graviton in the last chapter cause it didn't feel like it was as the quality that I wanted it to be at where it was. I haven't changed anything besides that, everything else is basically the same. Just gave them more aura and shit, make it feel more like a real clash between two of the strongest people in the verse going head-to-head. 
          
          Don't know when I'll get a chapter out next, gotta lock in for real life shit, so get ready if there's not much for a week or two...
          
          (I realise that every time I say I won't post for a bit I end up immediately doing the opposite, but it is what it is...)

minesweeper0

@__Trigger__ Yeah, a lot of the oc characters that I've introduced are very influenced by Marvel and DC (I literally just stole the name from the DC character, the Phantom Stranger, Graviton is a Marvel character, so are all of [Y/N]'s old friends from Hokkaido, and a few more will pop up eventually). But I'm tweaking them to suit the story, so they're not one-hundred percent just transplanted in.
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__Trigger__

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@minesweeper0 oh shit this reminds me, Graviton Is a character from marvel right? I looked up graviton MHA and it came up with a whole ass side character who I know you weren't referring to
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alek_ackerman

I just had a random thought pop into my head with no basis or evidence as to why I thought this
          
          
          But when I said Y/ns momma had to be a baddie to bag Graviton,
          
          Is it perchance, the teacher known as Thirteen? 

minesweeper0

@alek_ackerman Graviton is a very bad man, perhaps one of the worst people I've written, that's all I'll say.
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alek_ackerman

@minesweeper0 OH GOD THATS WHY HE WAS SO UNNERVED IN THE HOSPITAL WITH SHOKO 
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Octavian_Ken0223

Stumbled on your Black Tarantula story by chance and I also got into reading the Doomsday book too and I gotta say you got me in a chokehold with this writing man. I wish you all the best in your writing endeavors.

Octavian_Ken0223

@minesweeper0 I mean hey from what I’ve read so far it’s really good as a first attempt at writing. 
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minesweeper0

@Lord_Kensworth2004 I'm glad you're enjoying them and thanks for the kind words, but if you want to keep a high opinion of me DO NOT read Doomsday, I'm being very real, that was my first attempt at writing and not very good.
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minesweeper0

Wilson Bethel as Bullseye is such peak casting, they really got satan's strongest soldier on set and every time he shows up I immediately know someone's dying...

alek_ackerman

@minesweeper0 I think he did an absolute amazing job as Bullseye. Got the psychopath behaviour down perfectly. Even down to how he killed Foggy. He had the ability to kill him in a single hit, yet his death was dragged out so that Matt would hear every breath and wince foggy made as he fought. 
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Undazairable

@minesweeper0 He was that bruh, if he wanted you out of there he'll go do it himself on feet  by himself 
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