Hello!
I saw that you offer story reviews, and I’d love to get some feedback on the first chapter of my story, [Estela Nightingale and the Shadow of the Gods], if you’re open to it!
It’s set in the Percy Jackson universe, where demigods—children of gods and mortals—train at Camp Half-Blood to survive the dangers of their world. While the original series focuses on Percy and his friends, I wanted to explore a different perspective with my OC, Estella.
She’s the daughter of a primordial deity and a demigod father, which makes her a bit of an anomaly among other demigods. This first chapter introduces her and sets up some key dynamics at camp.
I’d really appreciate any feedback on pacing, characterization, and overall engagement. Let me know if you’d be interested!
Thanks in advance!