I liked your 40k Savior of Humanity story at first, but then... you kinda fliped the script. I'd seen all the build up to keeping the legions pure, and not having half fall. And yet... suddenly you just gave up, turned away from what i was hoping you'd do, Save Curze, get the Butcher's Nails outta Athena and her legion, help Petraz and all them... instead... you just gave up on that and, its disappointing. I'm not upset, its your story so by all means write it as you wish. But i feel you went the same route as most stories do, like the Fall was Inevitable. But i believe if we're meant to be the Light, then why can't we save them, why give up that hope. At least that's my opinion.