Hello NexusCrow-X,
I hope you are having a nice day. I love your writing about your story with Loud House: The Symbiote Sagas. I look forward to the next chapter. Also, I know it is none of my business to suggest anything from you. But, since this story you are making is a remake of your previous story, The Loud Symbiotes, I was wondering if, in your story remake, you would dive more into the symbiotes' origins, like their home planet, Klyntar, and maybe their issue with Knull and the codex. In addition, perhaps you can have specific chapters with each of the Louds having interactive moments with their symbiote partners, helping them get through life, like a slice of life when no danger is afoot, to have a closer relationship with them. I said all of this because your previous Loud House: Symbiote story had more interactions with Lincoln and Omega than it did for the other Loud siblings and their symbiotes, and I was wondering what Lori's, Luna's, Lynn's, Lucy's, Lana's, and Lisa's interactions with their symbiotes would be like while having a closer relationship with them besides Lincoln's. Also, (to me personally) in your previous story, when you were introducing more Marvel-like superheroes into the story, it leaned towards more like an Avengers crossover story than it did as a symbiote story.
Anyway, those are my suggestions. If these suggestions are not up to your liking, that's okay. I hope I wasn't intruding on your work. After reading your previous work and now reading what you have in your recent Symbiote Saga remake, making the symbiotes more interactive with each other got me excited to find out what happens next. Furthermore, I am not really familiar with any of the Marvel Venom Comics, but I saw all three of the Sony Venom movies. I was intrigued by the symbiote lore and the relationship between Eddie Brock and Venom, and I thought some of those could give you inspiration for your story remake and help you not get writer's writer's block.
God Bless.
