MehFuckIt

Hey y'all, status update: I'm not dead, I just got a girlfriend. Writing was a coping mechanism and she makes me happier than I have been in a while, hence the lack of work on my coping mechanism.
          	
          	I love my girlfriend, and unfortunately yes, this does mean that all my work is on hiatus until I either get the drive to write again or lose it all, the latter of which won't happen anytime soon.
          	
          	Thank you all,
          	
          	-MehFuckIt

DFNog3

@MehFuckIt Truly thankful for the update, very glad life’s going good for ya :D
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Sam959274

Hell yeah good job, also you’re writing is like excruciatingly detailed. If you ever want to you should think about writing an original book. I fell like you could cook something good up
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Coolerman0Cools0

@MehFuckIt Jesus no wonder why you haven't updated in a while lol. I thought something bad happened but actually.it was something worse. All jokes aside congrats on getting a girl dude!! I do hope you'll  start updating again, best of luck to you and your gf
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MehFuckIt

Hey y'all, status update: I'm not dead, I just got a girlfriend. Writing was a coping mechanism and she makes me happier than I have been in a while, hence the lack of work on my coping mechanism.
          
          I love my girlfriend, and unfortunately yes, this does mean that all my work is on hiatus until I either get the drive to write again or lose it all, the latter of which won't happen anytime soon.
          
          Thank you all,
          
          -MehFuckIt

DFNog3

@MehFuckIt Truly thankful for the update, very glad life’s going good for ya :D
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Sam959274

Hell yeah good job, also you’re writing is like excruciatingly detailed. If you ever want to you should think about writing an original book. I fell like you could cook something good up
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Coolerman0Cools0

@MehFuckIt Jesus no wonder why you haven't updated in a while lol. I thought something bad happened but actually.it was something worse. All jokes aside congrats on getting a girl dude!! I do hope you'll  start updating again, best of luck to you and your gf
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karvenman

I'm scared

karvenman

@karvenman it's been awhile since we had any updates. Not just story updates, just straight up any news of Mr. Fuckit. Not even sure if he's okay. His writing is too goated for something to happen to him, so I really need to hear some news from him
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karvenman

Greetings, Mr. Fuckit. I come seeking guidance and wisdom. I struggle applying emotions into my writing and applying that sense of what these characters are feeling. Stuff like "To her, it was like a thousand suns had just collapsed with every last light in her world, gone" stuff like that. I can write what's physically happening in the story but naturally applying these bits of narration to emphasise the character's feelings, that I struggle. So I ask the greatest writer I know, simply how?

karvenman

@MehFuckIt Ah, thanks, you're the best man
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MehFuckIt

@karvenman The biggest thing is to ensure that the statement fits the situation. As an example, if P were to get slapped in the face and I write, "It was as if the very hells had been casted unto his cheek." It won't make sense unless the person slapping him has a greater emotional significance. Basically, think about what your character is going through, how it would affect them, and write a accordingly. For another example, when I write for Ironwood's perspective, I make sure to be very dramatic and overbearing because his life is crumbling around him. With Penny, I try to be a more curious narrator, you get the gist.
            
            Overall, tone and significance are something you need to have a firm grasp on, and then the dramatic lines will flow nicely.
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MehFuckIt

Next chapter almost finished, at about 16k words currently. Expecting 20 by the end. I'm sorry for the delays, a lot has been happening in my life, but we keep it pushing.
          
          

DFNog3

Keep cooking 
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