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          I know this might be weird since we haven’t formally met, and PMs are now closed, but would you mind giving me feedback on my book “The City of Lost Souls”? It’s a pretty sensitive topic, so if you’re not for that, “Legends” is probably my best. If you’re not interested, it’s okay. If you are, would you mind letting me know if you see any errors and point them out please?
          
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