Anonymous_Writer2345

Chapter 13 of Deathly Hallows has been published

incognitoman2021

@1Lekhak I'm pretty sure he already has it thought out
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1Lekhak

@Anonymous_Writer2345 
          	  
          	  (6) Y/N can creates his own army of shadows(extracted from the dead) like the Shadow Army of Sung Jin-Woo. For shadow extraction, even a speck of ash of the target's body will do. This armies' first soldier should be Antonin Dolohov(whom he kills while going to extract the shadow of the basilisk in the chamber of secrets),whose new name is Yeager(hunter in german) and second The basilisk. This army includes lucious malfoy(whom draco kills), Lestrange Brothers etc. muggle criminals(like Psycopaths), who are able to use magic as shadow soldiers.
          	  
          	  (7)Give Draco a redemption arc in which he swears his loyalty(by making an unbreakable vow with Nevlie as witness) and joins Y/N in his quest to change the world. He proves himself worthy of Y/N's trust by killing Lucious Malfoy, who was torturing Hermoine Granger 
          	  
          	  (8)Y/N has a blue pheonix(a rare type of pheonix) as his familiar
          	  
          	  (9)Y/N recruits Gellert Grindelwald, who swears absolute loyalty to him(and actually remains loyal). He is not like a soldier, more like a partner
          	  
          	  (10) Harry surpasses Dumbledore and all previous headmasters in terms of power
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1Lekhak

@Anonymous_Writer2345 
          	  
          	  Some Ideas pls pls add it:
          	  
          	  (1)Y/N flames are like a fusion of Fiendfyre(its destruction) and Protego diaoblica(it control). It can destroy hocruxes and kill voldemort even if he has a hundred hocruxes. This flame will cut Voldemort's connection(causing the soul of voldemort in it to become pure energy that will merge into voldemorts soul in afterlife) ot the Hocruxes and send him to afterlife, with his hocruxes only having his energy signature and some memories, and in worse case a duplicate memory like the diary hocrux. His fire is upgraded by being fused with lightning making it faster, more controlled and can decide the speed at which it swallows the target. It leaves no ashes and instead of just burning, it also absorbs the target. Not even leaving ash or smoke
          	  
          	  (2)Y/N master transifguration(he can transform into anything or anyone without losing control or suffering any side effects, become intangible and create an invisiblity spell that can be detected by no means even Moody's eye can't), Alchemy(he acquires Nicholas Flamel knowledge via his journal), Darks Arts(smuggles books from Hogwarts and Dumstrang and learns all of it), Potions(creates werewolf remedy) and Charms
          	  
          	  (3)Y/N Masters Space Magic. Creates a better forms of teleportation than apperation, like creating an invisible portal through which he can walk through(based on the concept of vanishing cabinet) and Space bending(in which instead of going to the place he can just pull the space towards him)
          	  
          	  (4)Develops counter for killing curse
          	  
          	  (5)He studies the magic revolving pheonix tears and cojuration, and creates the spell that can heal and regenerate regardless of the injury even his head if destroyed and keep him forever young
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1Lekhak

Some Ideas pls pls add it:
          
          (1)Y/N flames are like a fusion of Fiendfyre(its destruction) and Protego diaoblica(it control). It can destroy hocruxes and kill voldemort even if he has a hundred hocruxes. This flame will cut Voldemort's connection(causing the soul of voldemort in it to become pure energy that will merge into voldemorts soul in afterlife) ot the Hocruxes and send him to afterlife, with his hocruxes only having his energy signature and some memories, and in worse case a duplicate memory like the diary hocrux. His fire is upgraded by being fused with lightning making it faster, more controlled and can decide the speed at which it swallows the target. It leaves no ashes and instead of just burning, it also absorbs the target. Not even leaving ash or smoke
          
          (2)Y/N master transifguration(he can transform into anything or anyone without losing control or suffering any side effects, become intangible and create an invisiblity spell that can be detected by no means even Moody's eye can't), Alchemy(he acquires Nicholas Flamel knowledge via his journal), Darks Arts(smuggles books from Hogwarts and Dumstrang and learns all of it), Potions(creates werewolf remedy) and Charms
          
          (3)Y/N Masters Space Magic. Creates a better forms of teleportation than apperation, like creating an invisible portal through which he can walk through(based on the concept of vanishing cabinet) and Space bending(in which instead of going to the place he can just pull the space towards him)
          
          (4)Develops counter for killing curse
          
          (5)He studies the magic revolving pheonix tears and cojuration, and creates the spell that can heal and regenerate regardless of the injury even his head if destroyed and keep him forever young

1Lekhak

(6) Y/N can creates his own army of shadows(extracted from the dead) like the Shadow Army of Sung Jin-Woo. For shadow extraction, even a speck of ash of the target's body will do. This armies' first soldier should be Antonin Dolohov(whom he kills while going to extract the shadow of the basilisk in the chamber of secrets),whose new name is Yeager(hunter in german) and second The basilisk. This army includes lucious malfoy(whom draco kills), Lestrange Brothers etc. muggle criminals(like Psycopaths), who are able to use magic as shadow soldiers.
          
          (7)Give Draco a redemption arc in which he swears his loyalty(by making an unbreakable vow with Nevlie as witness) and joins Y/N in his quest to change the world. He proves himself worthy of Y/N's trust by killing Lucious Malfoy, who was torturing Hermoine Granger 
          
          (8)Y/N has a blue pheonix(a rare type of pheonix) as his familiar
          
          (9)Y/N recruits Gellert Grindelwald, who swears absolute loyalty to him(and actually remains loyal). He is not like a soldier, more like a partner
          
          (10) Harry surpasses Dumbledore and all previous headmasters in terms of power

Death2305

Man, I just read the whole story upto the last post. The author did a really good job in this, except I really wish that the prophecy of killing Harry means killing the horcrux in harry, just a wish. Also, characters are improvised but I think Y/N dying in the end could be good only if it was his plan with his new army, otherwise the future of the story is uncertain. Thankful to the author for this good time of reading.
          

Anonymous_Writer2345

Chapter 13 of Deathly Hallows has been published

incognitoman2021

@1Lekhak I'm pretty sure he already has it thought out
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1Lekhak

@Anonymous_Writer2345 
            
            (6) Y/N can creates his own army of shadows(extracted from the dead) like the Shadow Army of Sung Jin-Woo. For shadow extraction, even a speck of ash of the target's body will do. This armies' first soldier should be Antonin Dolohov(whom he kills while going to extract the shadow of the basilisk in the chamber of secrets),whose new name is Yeager(hunter in german) and second The basilisk. This army includes lucious malfoy(whom draco kills), Lestrange Brothers etc. muggle criminals(like Psycopaths), who are able to use magic as shadow soldiers.
            
            (7)Give Draco a redemption arc in which he swears his loyalty(by making an unbreakable vow with Nevlie as witness) and joins Y/N in his quest to change the world. He proves himself worthy of Y/N's trust by killing Lucious Malfoy, who was torturing Hermoine Granger 
            
            (8)Y/N has a blue pheonix(a rare type of pheonix) as his familiar
            
            (9)Y/N recruits Gellert Grindelwald, who swears absolute loyalty to him(and actually remains loyal). He is not like a soldier, more like a partner
            
            (10) Harry surpasses Dumbledore and all previous headmasters in terms of power
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1Lekhak

@Anonymous_Writer2345 
            
            Some Ideas pls pls add it:
            
            (1)Y/N flames are like a fusion of Fiendfyre(its destruction) and Protego diaoblica(it control). It can destroy hocruxes and kill voldemort even if he has a hundred hocruxes. This flame will cut Voldemort's connection(causing the soul of voldemort in it to become pure energy that will merge into voldemorts soul in afterlife) ot the Hocruxes and send him to afterlife, with his hocruxes only having his energy signature and some memories, and in worse case a duplicate memory like the diary hocrux. His fire is upgraded by being fused with lightning making it faster, more controlled and can decide the speed at which it swallows the target. It leaves no ashes and instead of just burning, it also absorbs the target. Not even leaving ash or smoke
            
            (2)Y/N master transifguration(he can transform into anything or anyone without losing control or suffering any side effects, become intangible and create an invisiblity spell that can be detected by no means even Moody's eye can't), Alchemy(he acquires Nicholas Flamel knowledge via his journal), Darks Arts(smuggles books from Hogwarts and Dumstrang and learns all of it), Potions(creates werewolf remedy) and Charms
            
            (3)Y/N Masters Space Magic. Creates a better forms of teleportation than apperation, like creating an invisible portal through which he can walk through(based on the concept of vanishing cabinet) and Space bending(in which instead of going to the place he can just pull the space towards him)
            
            (4)Develops counter for killing curse
            
            (5)He studies the magic revolving pheonix tears and cojuration, and creates the spell that can heal and regenerate regardless of the injury even his head if destroyed and keep him forever young
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