nocturnalamp

If new adult zuko keeps looking that fine I’m gonna do something I’ll regret (starting another fic)

nocturnalamp

goddamnit… I spoke to soon
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_Silk_

Hi sorry, for messaging but I had to delete the whole comment thread cause I accidentally posted without checking my spelling and it just looked like I was a AH trying to spoil for ppl. I was gonna say that I know how’s it’s described but thinks it’s less that she has a little and more just cause twins are seen as one person and because Mai had cursed energy it kept maki from her full potential and same with maki keeping Mai from her own. So I interpret that less of maki having very little but as she definitely had zero but since she was a twin the HR could full be completed, and her taking the curse energy was less taking the little left in maki and more her expelling her’s and allowing the pact to full recognize that her. 
          
          I hope that makes sense lol and I’m liking the story so far, I hope you go all the way with it cause most stories I’ve read for Jjk just fall off and don’t make it past the halfway point of season 1.  So keep going your doing amazing!!

nocturnalamp

See I was back and forth with the whole maki and mai thing but I think that’s just because of the way it was written and then translated and then adapted and translated again lol! I think what you’re saying makes sense, and I might change later on if I feel it becomes more relevant to the story lol.
            
            and thank you so much!! any updates are slow but that’s just because I don’t get a lot of time to write during the week and my weekends have been filling up, I do intend to fully write supernova as well as third eye so you don’t have to worry about it falling off lol, it’s just slower than normal until I can balance my schedule again 
            
            Thank you so much for your support! I always appreciate comments!
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